daily practice

daily practice

most poems limp in lumpy—
there may be a line
with a trace of truth
I pare dead words away—
the verse has a life
independent of mine
does it voice its own truth?
what does it want to say?

I repeatedly speak it,
ear for its musical echo
rephrasing a line
prune this and cut that
until it feels pleasing

once in a while
it’s too disheveled
for shaping—I’ll snag
one single phrase
let go of the rest
and start fresh again

the rarest of poems
pours in clear—
I lift my hands
from the keys
no fussing with this one
let it shine its own song

3 thoughts on “daily practice

  1. Rabia Laurie Neeno

    Sweet! I love this! Immediately reminded me of Natalie Goldberg’s Writing Down the Bones, and William Stafford’s Writing the Australian Crawl!

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