The pantoum is a poetic form originating in 15th century Malaysia that uses repetition. It’s a poem of any length composed of four-line stanzas in which the second and fourth lines of each stanza serve as the first and third lines of the next stanza. The final stanza is often two lines from the first stanza.
thirst—a pantoum
be thirsty, it’s primary
a thirst that insists
it requires quenching
your spirit is hungry
a thirst that insists
that points the direction
your spirit is pining
to find your true home
it points the direction
with love and persistence
you’ll find your true home
even closer than breathing
be persistent and loving
and direct your attention
even prior to breathing
observe and you’ll find it
direct your attention
turn inward each time
observe and you’ll find it
your near and dear home
be thirsty, it’s primary
it requires quenching
2022 ©Amrita Skye Blaine
I’m writing a poem a day. These are drafts—not final versions.
I love this form and this poem. Delicious!
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I really like the form, too. I’m planning to publish a book of pantoums.
Thanks for letting me know! Love,
Amrita
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