
without a name
I greet first light
without a name,
without naming
slip my arm
around your waist
hug you,
snug into warmth,
breath and balm—
one whole
a finger snap of time
distinguishing begins,
splits this from that
hawk from sky
deer from field
me from you,
grateful scent remains
This photo is from the Barnstorming Blog, which I’ve followed for fifteen years.
Thank you, Emily Gibson. https://barnstorming.blog/
2023 ©Amrita Skye Blaine
I’m writing a poem a day. These are drafts—not final versions.
Lovely poem! I’m so snagged by the first three lines that lead me to (among other lovely images) “a finger snap of time.” So nicely done!
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Hi–I assume you are Janis? Thank you for your comment! I love when people leave comments. How did you find my blog?
with love,
Amrita
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You responded to a poem of mine on Facebook where I mentioned Rosemerry Trommer. So I signed up to receive your poems, too! I’m at janishaag.com.
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I’ll look you up tomorrow! I have to go to bed—I’m up at 5:15 to write.
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